My favorite place is my room. My room has some good points. And it has some bad points. My room relax me. I'm going to introduce you about it.
First, I'm going tell you about my room's temperature. My room lies south. So my room is hotter than other rooms. Especially, in summer, my room is so hot! If there are not air conditioner and electric fan in my room, I can't live. In winter, my room is warm, so little hotter than other rooms.
Second is about my bookshelf. There are a lot of books. There are various kind of books. It is comics, textbooks, illustrated books, dictionaries, picture books, fashion magazines and my yearbooks,,, something others. I lose my yearbook of pupil, so I'll have to find it soon. I hope that it will found quickly. About comics. There are good old things. For example a novel by Takahashi Rumiko. She wrote a lot of comics. I like "Ranma 1/2" and "Inuyasha", so I have some comics of those. I couldn't buy the complete set, because I was a pupil, so I have not enough monry to buy it. Other, I have series of Harry Pottar. I love those series. I haven't liked reading books since I was a young. Especially, if the words are small, I'm poor at reading books. But Harry Pottar is so exciting, so I can read it smoothly. I read something when I want to read book.
Nect, I'm going to introduce you about my collection. That are perfumes and handkerchief. I like those very much. I have collected handkerchief since I was a junior high school student. Especially I like ANNA SUI's handkerchief. so I have a lot of those handkerchiefs. Recently, I collected perfume. I went to foreign country. Then, I bought four perfumes. Those are my favorite fregrance.
Thus, there are a lot of my favorite things in my room. And there are good old things too. Those makes me relax. If you have chance to come to my house Please come to my room. I'm waiting!
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Hello, Saki! I read your essay.
ReplyDeleteAfter I read your essay I want to go to your room.
Especially, I like paragraph about your collection.
I also want to see your collection.
Hi Saki :)
ReplyDeleteI think your room is fashionable!
I also like ANNA SUI very much!!
I want to go to there someday :)
Hello, Saki!!
ReplyDeleteI'd like to go to your room someday.
Let's play games!!
Do you often read comics?
Hello, Saki.
ReplyDeleteYour room seems to be comfortable in winter.
I think you misspell on the beginning of the forth paragraph. You had better put a picture on your essay.
I want to go your room.
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