To Yuka
Thank you for your comment;)
Daffy!!!I love it too;)
I went to go Disney Land.
I like parade of night.
To Niina
Thank you for your comment;)
You like Mariah too!?
I'm very happy!!!!!!
Hero and Through the rain are very good songs:)
I think that you will like my favorite Mariah's songs.
To Chinami
Thank you for your camment;)
It is very good experience for me.
I wore a dark kimono.
My kimono's pattern is not Western-style.
To Hitomi
Thank you for your comment;)
It is very good experience for me.
It is very fresh!!!!
When do you take "Maedori"??
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Hi Saki,
ReplyDeleteFor essay 1-01b, you should include BOTH what you wrote for essay 1-01a (introduce myself) AND the extra information that you've collected here - in one essay (1-02b), divided into separate paragraphs.
There is no need to reply to this comment, but please do share what you learn from it with your classmates and peers.
Cheers.
Hello again, Saki!
ReplyDeleteNow that you have a new post for revised Essay 1-01b, it seems like the label "essay prep." would be better for this one than "essays" or "revisions," Different titles would also help distinguish this post from that including your revised essay.
Cheers, PB